EraserX
03-18-2004, 12:57 PM
This is a quick design I just made for a triathlon in Sullivan. The client approved the initial sketch, but I just sent the proof for the finished version. Crits and comments are welcome!
http://www.pensnpixels.com/postedimages/triathlon2.jpg
Scotty
03-18-2004, 01:25 PM
You have done well with those characters, I think you could have used a diffented font, Plus that big hand hides the name triathlon.......but don't get me wrong, I like what you have done and if the client approved it....then thats bingo eh!
Steeldolphin
03-18-2004, 01:46 PM
Yeah the hand does hide the "i" in Triathalon adn teh Sullivan part, but in the end its still recognizable (so long as the its a recognizable place in the community). I really like the swimmer but the little water drops dont quite lok right to me, maybe they need to be smaller? Not sure. I like the composition over all and the illos are good too. :)
souljahs story
03-18-2004, 02:01 PM
this is great, the font in my eyes is fine, i guess the shorthand writiing of mile am ML is a little bit confusing, as the font version of the L as got that horizontal line across the bottom, making it a bit unlegible
might be best just to turn it into mile.
the figures are great, but like steeldolphin said, the water droplets look a little off, they look like pebbles
and maybe a bit of a wheel would be nice for the cyclist?
anyway good stuff :)