Malice
05-25-2004, 02:17 AM
Some quick scrap I made while I was awake last night ^^. Tell me what you think about it ^^. I actually wanna move the city in the background to the right so it stands infront of the moon and the planet ^^. And on the "end" result (collored and all) I want the moon light reflection on the tree and the grass to be blasting ^^. hope it will work.
[here] (http://www.deviantart.com/view/7548014/)
BTW I had problems adding the IMG wth the thing, It didn't show up ??
freakyclean
05-25-2004, 06:39 AM
I don't think deviantart will let you link images.
Sketch looks like a good start. :)
Steeldolphin
05-25-2004, 07:05 AM
Yes I think moving some of the elements around would help this composition, as it stands the tree is blocking whats behind it.
Malice
05-25-2004, 07:46 AM
yeah thats why I wanted ti plan to move the city ito the left ^^ and the shdows on the planet from the moon arnt alright but it was an 6 min scrap so ^^ btw, does anyoneknow where to host them then ?
Malice
05-31-2004, 01:35 AM
I've drawn some deeper into the things and this is the way 'm so far, no hang man, because it would ruin some nice view ^^
[Link] (http://www.deviantart.com/view/7709048/)
though there should be some detail on the tree, grass and the city wall ^^
Steeldolphin
05-31-2004, 10:19 AM
Thats a real improvement Malice, the composition is much better. :)