Cone Graff
03-12-2004, 05:49 AM
Here's a small brochure with recipees made for promoting their sauce.
I believe most of you know the company, they have been our client for some time now, and i must say i've grown to favour this particular client.
http://www.inosteve.dk/knorr-folder/01.jpg
http://www.inosteve.dk/knorr-folder/02.jpg
http://www.inosteve.dk/knorr-folder/03.jpg
http://www.inosteve.dk/knorr-folder/04.jpg
http://www.inosteve.dk/knorr-folder/05.jpg
digitalelement
03-12-2004, 05:55 AM
nice CG. Nice color selection and nice layouts. Very clean look :grinning:
freakyclean
03-12-2004, 06:52 AM
Yeah it looks really nice and clean.
There are a couple of very minor things I would look at:
-The garlic under herbs and garlic doesn't have enough white space after the text.
-On the last page the white text at the bottom isn't readable enough imho. It needs a fine black outline I think.
-A couple of pictures like for the Dild and the Caesar have a little bit of grey showing at the top where it should be feathered out to white, amybe that's just the web image though.
- The cover looks a little empty in the middle. There is the heavy logo at the top and pic at the bottom and then lots of white space in the middle. It may have helped to increase the spacing between the two words slightly. Same for the header on the last page.
Overall it looks very nice. How did you get such a nice design by the client without them wrecking it with changes???
:)
Cone Graff
03-12-2004, 07:09 AM
-The garlic under herbs and garlic doesn't have enough white space after the text.
Thanks for pointing that out, i was kinda in a hurry when i made this and didn't even notice
-On the last page the white text at the bottom isn't readable enough imho. It needs a fine black outline I think.
Thats just the web image
-A couple of pictures like for the Dild and the Caesar have a little bit of grey showing at the top where it should be feathered out to white, amybe that's just the web image though.
Web image again yeah
- The cover looks a little empty in the middle. There is the heavy logo at the top and pic at the bottom and then lots of white space in the middle. It may have helped to increase the spacing between the two words slightly. Same for the header on the last page.
Good point, but then again, centering the text would be too obvious, thanks for mentioning it anyways
How did you get such a nice design by the client without them wrecking it with changes???
One of the reasons why i love this client, they leave it up to us most of the times.
Thanks for the constructive comments, they're always appreciated
Scotty
03-12-2004, 08:25 AM
Very proffesional indeed, I am sure it'll look great in the brochure.....are you getting the contract for the Swedish one?
Steeldolphin
03-12-2004, 10:02 AM
Yeah nice work. Looks like you had some great stock to work with and some nice choice of type in there as well.
Very clean and professional.
knorr, big in britain, nice client man
Shade
03-12-2004, 01:14 PM
super nice man! Freaky already said everything that caught my eye, so I'll just say awesome :)