still kinda rough right now...

http://home.earthlink.net/~sejamy1/images/defiance.jpg

Took a while before I actually saw that is was a snake head skull. Think that's caused by the front tooth beeing aligned with the circle. Besides that it's really nice work. Looking forward to see it finished. :)

JC, I got the same feeling when I looked at it, but it certainly caught my eye and I like it.....moreguiness, you are really creating catchy and proffesional looking stuff- keep up the good work!

It is definitely awesome although I did have to look at it for a bit before I realized what it was.

The spiky mandala in the back is a nice touch but maybe a little overpowering?

Actually I wouldnt hav guessed it was a snakes skull, but its still early for me....

I see an arm and shoulder joint and a head of some sort of strange creature...which i thought was pretty cool. heheh

Any ways the illustration is still very good and the composition is coming along as well, but that front tooth being aligned with the circle makes it slightly hard to read.

Actually I wouldnt hav guessed it was a snakes skull, but its still early for me....

I see an arm and shoulder joint and a head of some sort of strange creature...which i thought was pretty cool. heheh

Any ways the illustration is still very good and the composition is coming along as well, but that front tooth being aligned with the circle makes it slightly hard to read.


Yeah it was late last night when I added stuff...I'll fix it. A lot of folks aren't getting the skull thing though hmmm....

I'm with steeldolphin. I totally didn't see what is was even after looking at it several times but it looked cool (whatever it was). ;)

Making the teeth smoother than they are and changing their colour would help in addition to what was mentioned about the circle.

It also looks like you have some bones missing which I think adds to the recognition difficulty.


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http://home.earthlink.net/~sejamy1/images/defiance2.jpg

Ok this is way better :grin2: . It is still missing some recognition factor though. While you may have the skull anatomically correct it is not easily visually recognizable.

I think the two biggest problems are the upper jaw area under the eye where the two bones meet and the direction the head is facing. I think if the head was facing to the right it may help but maybe I'm wrong. Also why isn't there a bone with small teeth on it on the other side of the head?

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Ok this is way better :grin2: . It is still missing some recognition factor though. While you may have the skull anatomically correct it is not easily visually recognizable.

I think the two biggest problems are the upper jaw area under the eye where the two bones meet and the direction the head is facing. I think if the head was facing to the right it may help but maybe I'm wrong. Also why isn't there a bone with small teeth on it on the other side of the head?

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cause I'm a lazy bastard

Yeeeeah! Much better imo. :D freakyclean covered the rest above.

Yeah!......you have really cracked this up a notch, it's looking a lot better....

great looking logo, but indeed, i didn't saw a snake skull at first glance