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alda.b
04-10-2004, 02:00 AM
Been looking at this too long, so it's time to get some feedback... click the image for larger version.

http://www.aldabdesigning.com/graphics/showcase/being750.jpg (http://www.aldabdesigning.com/graphics/showcase/being.jpg)

Scotty
04-10-2004, 07:42 AM
This is really nice...love what you have done to the face and eyes....

Steeldolphin
04-10-2004, 12:04 PM
This is looking good so far alda. I like the images coming off the face, very subtle and the eyes are cool. One thing that bothers me abit though is the 'egg-shape' of the face....its kinda the opposite shape direction so to me it throws of the aesthetics of the head/face shape a bit.

freakyclean
04-10-2004, 12:16 PM
I think maybe if you cropped this a bit so it is more portrait it would look better. I find the heavyness dark/red area distracting. I think if there was less of the dark/red background it would bring out the face a bit more. The "egg" Shaped face doesn't bother me at all.

Maybe try bring some of the darkers colours and reds (just a bit) into the face a bit? In the lips, eyebrows and eyelids?

:)