Steeldolphin
03-28-2004, 07:51 PM
Here is the 2nd in a series of 3 images I plan on doing with a series of photos I took at a local mill.
Similar in many ways to the first but different as well. :) I am not sure how I feel about this one...I like the contrast over the first one Click Here (www.steeldolphin.com/forum/mill01_web.jpg) but Ithink it may be too much here and a slight imbalance in teh composition..but I am trying to break out of some of my rules.
Here is the second one Mill 02
http://www.steeldolphin.com/forum/mustyeild_web.jpg
:)
Hazley
03-29-2004, 11:00 AM
I like this. I think it being too busy makes the image as the first one didn`t have as much detail as this one. Hope that made sence :grin2:
Scotty
03-29-2004, 10:46 PM
Yeah!..I like this one aswell, to me -its got that western style look going on...
digitalelement
03-30-2004, 07:44 PM
it's cool idea, but I dont know, I think the sign on the right is alittle too "over powering". doesn't flow from side to side well, it just doesnt seem like "one" image, i dont know if im making sense or anything, and dont mean to be rude, just giving my honest opinion. surry :(
Steeldolphin
03-30-2004, 08:16 PM
it's cool idea, but I dont know, I think the sign on the right is alittle too "over powering". doesn't flow from side to side well, it just doesnt seem like "one" image, i dont know if im making sense or anything, and dont mean to be rude, just giving my honest opinion. surry :(
I appreciate honest criticism, its why I post images up. :) I agree on a few points with you. I like the sign and the texture, but it is a bit over powering but by itself its not much more than a sign, and more of the building takes away from the signs readability...therein lies my quandry.
I may go back into this or maybe not...most of me says just get the third one done and call it a day. :)
Thanks for the feedback guys.
digitalelement
03-31-2004, 02:42 PM
I may go back into this or maybe not...most of me says just get the third one done and call it a day. :)
Thanks for the feedback guys.
hehe...just call it a day, that's what I always do :grin2: