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Rhino -
I still have some more work on it but mostly just detail work to get more finalized at print size but I thought I would post it now to get your thoughts. :)
EraserX
03-16-2004, 10:43 PM
Lookin' good, Chris. I'm assuming you plan on making some of the edges crisper and bringing a little more contrast into this?
Steeldolphin
03-16-2004, 11:01 PM
Yeah I will be tightening this up a bit, but I am more or less happy with the overal contrast and value range at this point, but we will see how it goes as I finish it up (or how it looks to me tomorrow and I realize how bad it really is).
adam
03-17-2004, 12:51 AM
nice texture, the parts on the lower right where its shadow look kind of wierd though
i wish i could draw animals
Hazley
03-17-2004, 05:10 AM
I like this! I also like the texture
show off... :cheeky:
Scotty
03-17-2004, 06:57 AM
Boy!...when do you find the time to do awesome stuff like this?- and small question- Is the eye finished?....
ThirdForce
03-17-2004, 09:40 AM
I have yet to see a painting from you that I wasn't amazed at. This one is especially good. Love the colors and texture... wow. That is all.
~3F
Jeff O.
03-17-2004, 09:48 AM
I like the composition, i.e. - the vertical-ness of the piece, with the eye in the center. Very cool. I could see this being a promo piece for a zoo or a National Geo special or something. Good job.
digitalelement
03-17-2004, 10:50 AM
looks great SD, the texture looks awesome!:grinning:
You get an A from me.
monk
03-17-2004, 07:29 PM
great texture man, agreed about the depth, but it might just need a few more hihglightls around the face, if you get the nose area (think it's called a nose) lighter than the top of the head i think it'd fix it without doing too much major contrasting (forgive me, i'm having a bad england day)
oh yeh, try an unsharp mask, think t'd really suit this :)
Steeldolphin
03-17-2004, 10:30 PM
monk you and your sharpens ;)
I have worked a bit more into this and infact redone alot of the skin texture in the head, and am working on the rest. I will repost when I am done. Its already looking better to me, so hopefully I will be able to get to where I will be 100% happy with it.
thanks again for the helpful crits folks.
Steeldolphin
03-18-2004, 12:15 AM
reworked the skin and added some texture. It looks better at print size, but still far from what I would like but tis going to take more time and alot more practice for me. I think I will call this one done and move on to my next wildlife victim. :)
http://www.steeldolphin.com/forum/rhino2_web.jpg
Scotty
03-18-2004, 12:33 AM
SD....I do not know what you did, but this looks even better......
ThirdForce
03-18-2004, 09:23 AM
Im calling P.E.T.A ... before anymore wildlife are harmed ;)