Hi guys, I just noticed that I hadn't got a sig, lol, so I went away for a while, and threw this one together. I am not too happy with it, so I would like a bit of advice as to what could be done to fix it.....!? :)
alda.b
05-17-2002, 04:31 PM
The only thing that strikes me is the height. I think reducing it might produce a more eye-pleasing width to height ratio. Other than that, I think it's great! :D
Steeldolphin
05-17-2002, 04:55 PM
Well I agree with alda.b in the height thing, in addition you might want ot also increase the contrast in the light colored shape you have there(left side). Even with the black text on the left, the image need some balance from the large (and cool) black character you have there, so by adding some darker elelments to the light colored shape you may help balance out the image.
deep_thought
05-17-2002, 04:56 PM
Loose the Jamiroquai logo ;P
Steeldolphin
05-17-2002, 05:07 PM
thought that looked familiar. ;)
takai
05-18-2002, 06:55 AM
Yeah, definately lose the Jamiroquai logo. Its been WAY overused.
And darken the orange faded bit
Okidoke :) Thanks for the critique guys, I'll get to work on it soono