Im attempting a grungy type of look for this one.
Not sure about the left corner section
any suggestions would be great.
http://www.deviantart.com/view.php?id=337066
freakyclean
05-10-2002, 10:33 AM
I'm not the best at grunge but...
I would try and desaturate the colours a bit. They are a little too bright for my liking. I would also stick with just the 3 "good" images I think. You don't have to make it squareish you could either make it long or tall with just the three images or just mount the images on a background skewed a bit like a note board.
In the end it's really what you like though
Steeldolphin
05-11-2002, 11:20 AM
I agree on the desaturation bit as well. However I like how the toilet pic standouts in the bottom corner, it acts as a compositional anchor of sorts - at least to my eye. You might want to even go so far as to remove the top left corner pic and replace it with your text there.
here are 2 updates
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php?id=340754
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php?id=340748
salvo
05-12-2002, 12:28 PM
I like the one with the text in the left hand top corner, but it might be better smaller maybe.
attrice
05-12-2002, 05:42 PM
I like the desaturation, but I also like the text in the top corner.
Since that top left image is so dark and simple anyway, what about darkening it further and putting the text on top?