I'd just like to have the opinion of more advanced users than me. :)
takai
05-16-2002, 11:27 PM
Interesting, but too jarring i find.
Pick one set of colors and stick with it.
Also what type of design will it be?
well... it does not really have any purpose except for the way it looks.
Steeldolphin
05-17-2002, 04:09 PM
I would have to agree with takai.
Welcome to the board BTW :)
Kriek
05-17-2002, 09:43 PM
Well I can't say that I'm more advanced than anyone, but I will give you my honest critique and offer my suggestions.
First off: I love the background. It feels very 60's or 70's to me.
Typography: its ok, but I'd try to change the color(s) to something that better matches the background. Shades of blue or green come to mind.
Overall: There is something that is lacking, but that's ok. Maybe it's not needed here. I would suggest some sort of border to kind of weight (anchor) down the image. Nothing to bold, but something light and purposeful could add soo much to this.
I also have to agree with Chris and takai about finding a good color combo (set) and sticking with it throughout the whole image. This is a great job man.
takai
05-18-2002, 05:46 AM
hehe, Kriek is distinguishing between SD and myself, thats cool
thanks guys.
I'll work on it =)
next time I'll upload my work in 'work in progress' instead of 'finished work'...