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Gorn
05-16-2002, 10:18 PM
I'd just like to have the opinion of more advanced users than me. :)

takai
05-16-2002, 11:27 PM
Interesting, but too jarring i find.

Pick one set of colors and stick with it.
Also what type of design will it be?

Gorn
05-17-2002, 09:07 AM
well... it does not really have any purpose except for the way it looks.

Steeldolphin
05-17-2002, 04:09 PM
I would have to agree with takai.

Welcome to the board BTW :)

Gorn
05-17-2002, 04:28 PM
thank you

Kriek
05-17-2002, 09:43 PM
Well I can't say that I'm more advanced than anyone, but I will give you my honest critique and offer my suggestions.

First off: I love the background. It feels very 60's or 70's to me.

Typography: its ok, but I'd try to change the color(s) to something that better matches the background. Shades of blue or green come to mind.

Overall: There is something that is lacking, but that's ok. Maybe it's not needed here. I would suggest some sort of border to kind of weight (anchor) down the image. Nothing to bold, but something light and purposeful could add soo much to this.

I also have to agree with Chris and takai about finding a good color combo (set) and sticking with it throughout the whole image. This is a great job man.

takai
05-18-2002, 05:46 AM
hehe, Kriek is distinguishing between SD and myself, thats cool

Gorn
05-18-2002, 01:42 PM
thanks guys.
I'll work on it =)
next time I'll upload my work in 'work in progress' instead of 'finished work'...