I’m rather new to the digital art community, but I really enjoy looking at the creativity of others. I was going to put this work in the finished forum, however, I don't have that feeling that it is quite finished yet. Actually, I don't like the title... a new one would be nice. So, please give me suggestions :) This was actually an experiment with digital light, a first for me, but suggestions for anything would be nice.
Thanks for your time.
~3F

Life&Death (http://www.3f-gfx.com/images/manipulations/Life&Death.jpg)

Actually this is pretty good, I quite like it. I think you did a good job on the 'light'. I personally think that the use of type in the image is unnecessary and in its place perhaps some sort of collision of light where the beams meet in the middle to balance the composition.

Overall very nice work and I look forward to seeing more from you.

Welcome ot the board. :)

I agree with Steeldolphin, I thought it was very good and very original.....but, I wasn't to keen on the font you have used.....and as for the title, how about "The Last taken breath".........

hmmm i like this... very ncie image... though personally i was wondering if you could use something in the bg... you know... just the hint of a starscape or something... should add a lot to the image imo...

Thank you for the kind words, and the suggestions are great. I will work on it more and let you know what i come up with. I like that title alot Scotty, thank you.

~3F

I like that title alot Scotty, thank you.
~3F
Yeah!...sounds pretty good eh! and you are welcome...