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Snoogie
05-08-2002, 02:47 AM
Photo 1 (http://www.snoogie.alive-again.de/photos/gute/arc/essen_1.jpg)
Photo 2 (http://www.snoogie.alive-again.de/photos/gute/arc/essen_2.jpg)
Photo 3 (http://www.snoogie.alive-again.de/photos/gute/arc/essen_3.jpg)
Photo 4 (http://www.snoogie.alive-again.de/photos/gute/arc/essen_4.jpg)
Photo 5 (http://www.snoogie.alive-again.de/photos/gute/arc/essen_5.jpg)
Photo 6 (http://www.snoogie.alive-again.de/photos/gute/arc/essen_6.jpg)

Thats my first try in architecture photography so I would really like to hear critics and comments.

Taken with Sony DSC-P1

Thanks
Snoogie

deep_thought
05-08-2002, 06:10 AM
I like the first shot a lot. The right angle in the building is a real eye jerker. I like the depth and perspective of this shot, and that it leads you to the blue open sky. :)

While the second shot is great at showing proportion and size, I'm not as keen on it. It could easily be mistaken for something besides a buidling, the angle, in my opinion is too steep. Nonetheless, I love the contrast and depth.

The third and fourth shots are nice, but they don't do anything for me like the first two do. The fifth is much like the third and fourth expect it stands out because of the architecture, very cool building.

The sixth one is pretty cool, but I would have liked to see it from a lower angle pointing up. That would have given a lot more depth and proporation than there is already.

Overall, I like this series.Definately a good start to achitecture photography. :)

dubtastic
05-08-2002, 08:27 AM
3 & 4 - These are not as strong as the other images. The angle, or lack of, in 3 is not as exciting. The colors in 4 do not hold up against the other photos.

I love the rest of them, especially number 6. 6 seems to stand out in my mind the most. Good shots!

Steeldolphin
05-08-2002, 09:25 AM
1 and 2 are very strong, adn agree with the other comments. I am also a big fan of number 6 too.

photok
05-08-2002, 05:56 PM
I also like #1 & #6.

I agree with deep_thought, #6 would look better if shot from a lower angle. A wider angle lense would also make the corridor appear longer.

The only thing I would do for #1 is shoot it with an 81A, it would warm it up a bit without loosing the blueness of the image.

Well done Snoogie, keep up the good work.

takai
05-08-2002, 07:23 PM
1 is very strong, i quite like that vivid right angle, and muted reflection.

6 is also quite nice, but feels like it would have been better facing up instead of horizontal.