This is a work I did a while back and was looking for some constructive criticism (mainly because all I get from friends is stuff like "niceness," "cool," or "great") in short, I'm not heading in the way of becoming a better artist like that at all.

http://www.angelfire.com/vt2/vfanarchy/dove.jpg

It has great potential... what I see is that it lacks definition and depth. I would try defining the bird a little more making it more "3-D" to make it pop out more. Also the fire could use some works as well. Try looking at some real fire to determine how it really looks. It's just that the color seems off to me. But nice job.

I really like the dove part, not a big fan of the flames. Its more of a phoenix from the flames thing than a dove image with all those flames. I guess what I am saing is that I dont connect the two since the dove is so symbolic and means something else to me.

Compositionally its not quite in balance but I think may be because its so bottom heavy. Possibly adding more white or lighter colors into the flames mayhelp this somewhat.

It is a good start though and like Ed says it has some good potential.

I hope this helps. :)

Cheers.

True... I think I'm definately going to focus on the balance of the composition... and now that I reflect upon it, it definately does have that need to be brought out more Ed, so thanks alot for the suggestions! It's really appreciated!