http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8314064/


this is an inprogres gift art for a friend of mine, this is her character.

anyway, i think her right (our left), arm is messed up, but can't quite figure out what.
if anyone can help me with that, or anything else they spot, i'd appreciate it.

Very impressive Shyft. You definitly have skill and I personally would be doing a happy dance if I could pencil that well.

As far as the arm, I really don't see the flaw unless it's the positioning itself you dislike. The way it is now, she is sort of jutting it forward a bit which works. If you were looking to the elbow back a bit more (simply flowing back into perspective) then you might want to adjust the elbow back a bit. Frankly I think the way you have it now looks like she may have more weight on her hip which I think is adds movement to the picture.

Just an observation from an aspiring art hobbiest.