souljahs story
06-11-2004, 11:07 AM
erm really struggling with knowing what to do to advertise a website for a magazine, not sure what to put down for text either.
but i came up with the idea of surfers.
hopefully you understand the connection?
if not let me know :)
all crits and comments welcomed
http://www.deviantart.com/view/8013295/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8013445/
meashman
06-11-2004, 11:15 AM
I think they work well...appropriate concept, surfing the web and all! :p
souljahs story
06-11-2004, 11:20 AM
thank you.
I am just worried about them having nothing to do with the topic of the magazine i have created.
and i am wondering if this maybe an issue?
freakyclean
06-11-2004, 12:05 PM
Hmm I will have to think about this one a bit.
Unless you are well know I would suggest putting some more info into the ad as to what you/it is.
One thing that immediately sprang to mind was having the water filled with translucent 1s and 0s like jellyfish. I'm famous for my cheesy ideas though.
:)
meashman
06-11-2004, 12:27 PM
thank you.
I am just worried about them having nothing to do with the topic of the magazine i have created.
and i am wondering if this maybe an issue?
Maybe you should add a tagline, like:
Surf on over to (website URL)
although that is a bit corny! :)
souljahs story
06-11-2004, 12:40 PM
surf on over sounds fun it could work lol.
i also have:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8015229/
get it? the information highway?
lol everyone seems to also be saying fill the ocean with 1s and 0s!
mojojojo
06-11-2004, 04:40 PM
Really stupid question, but did you actually take the picture in the first one?
The reason I ask, is because you have photography listed as what you do and you might get calls for that kind of work.
The last one reminds me of a desolate place. The information highway has lots of traffic on it.
I prefer the horizontal layouts best.
Nemesis
06-11-2004, 05:08 PM
I think they all works just fine.
souljahs story
06-11-2004, 11:45 PM
cheers and no not my photographs i should change that,
i found them on
stock exchange
Scotty
06-12-2004, 12:22 AM
I think the surfing adds will work pretty well........I also agree that maybe adding a slogan will kick this a wee bit further.......
"If the waves don't knock you back...We will "